Patriotism

I like it alot, I just think you should have a better lighting source especially because of a dark back ground.
Other thank the light source You should work on you antomy too, it getting bettet, but the shoulders down should be a bit bigger/wider. Maybe you could try using more colors. My favorite part of this was the exprission on the face. I can't quite think of anything else to say aout the picture. Heres some ramblinging to keep you busy lol. You did a really good job. Im seeing alot of improvement. Keep it up! and the only reason im doing this is because we both have a week of premi left ;n;